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Broke.

There were a few good moments, but too far between. However, the part that floored me was Kono's manipulation of a grieving kid. Awkwardly written and more convoluted than it had to be. Too much of that all the way around. The slo-mo dramatic moment carrying the kid out. Seriously? There's silly fun and there's just silly.

This was just silly. Clunk.:)

Date: 2011-04-19 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sharpes-hussy.livejournal.com
clunker indeed...........
I find the writing haphazard but that is true of most network series.....

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