Hawaii Five-0: 1.21
Apr. 19th, 2011 02:16 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Broke.
There were a few good moments, but too far between. However, the part that floored me was Kono's manipulation of a grieving kid. Awkwardly written and more convoluted than it had to be. Too much of that all the way around. The slo-mo dramatic moment carrying the kid out. Seriously? There's silly fun and there's just silly.
This was just silly. Clunk.:)
There were a few good moments, but too far between. However, the part that floored me was Kono's manipulation of a grieving kid. Awkwardly written and more convoluted than it had to be. Too much of that all the way around. The slo-mo dramatic moment carrying the kid out. Seriously? There's silly fun and there's just silly.
This was just silly. Clunk.:)
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Date: 2011-04-19 09:58 pm (UTC)Eh - that would be the stories languishing at the moment....